Sunday, 2 May 2010

Doctor Who The Conflicted Rescue

Police Department Laboratory England 63Rd Century
(Officers see a picture of a stolen item)
ADAM JONES:That is a very valuable object we can not let him escape with it and not be executed
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:I agree because whoever he and his associate are they have to be found and executed as my new laws say.Is that clear.Can you Get them for me?
TOM MILLS:Yes using the trilingator from the wreckage of what looks like a boiler of an alien ship it configures and drags back things using DNA we picked up DNA of the criminal and all we need to do now is configure it.
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:I am very impressed now all intruders will be easily captured
TOM MILLS:Yes indeed I am sending the signal now
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:I am leaving you know you what to do I expect to see video footage of their disintegration if I am not their for their executions which I am very sure I will be their for the executions but anyway Call me if you need any assistance Mr Jones come with me we need to do some planning and I will need an extra hand
TOM MILLS:Signal Found dragging back we will soon have the criminals prime minister don't you worry and you will be so proud
Title Sequence
Tardis materialises in a strange way creating terrible noises and groans constantly fluctuating
PROFESSOR COOPER:Increase Strength the criminal is fighting back
TOM MILLS:Trying Professor but our stabilizers are exploding our machine is alien and has immense power it is going to destroy earth if we can't stabilize
PROFESSOR COPPER:Put the machine to maximum
TOM MILLS:That is beyond safety restrictions
PROFESSOR COPPER:Do it now
TOM MILLS:Exitating the generators putting the machine to maximum professor
Suddenly the room explodes into flames and the tardis fully materialises
The doctor and Amy go out of the tardis with the interior and exterior of the tardis
exploding with fumes steaming out
AMY:Will your time machine be alright?
THE DOCTOR:Yes, hopefully anyway Where are we this is very strange how on earth did we get pulled into materialising here that technology must have been immensely powerful it almost destroyed my ship
AMY:doctor look I think we Should we get out of here
THE DOCTOR:Lets find out what they want
AMY:They won't want anything appetising for us
THE DOCTOR:The Tardis can't dematerialise for a long while yet because of that technology whatever technology it was that got us here ,we are stuck and even if I tried that technology might just pull us back again and the tardis couldn't survive two big blows in a day.
Soldiers and officers walk up to them
COMMANDER BROACH:Well here they are the criminal and his associate
THE DOCTOR:We didn't kill them scientists
COMMANDER BROACH:We know you didn't kill them Their machine is very dangerous and it definitely killed them never mind but more importantly we are here because of what you did
AMY:What did we do?
COMMANDER BROACH:You Stole a box a very precious box Do not lie to Me
THE DOCTOR:What box?
COMMANDER BROACH:A homing box from the Byzantium with precious security footage
THE DOCTOR:Oh that box
COMMANDER BROACH:Don't Play games with me just give me the box
THE DOCTOR:If you let me go in my spaceship
COMMANDER BROACH:How can we trust you?
SOLIDER:We can hold the girl as hostage and if he doesn't return in 30 minutes we can kill her
OFFICER:That is a good idea because he is heavily associated with her
COMMANDER BROACH:Go on then get me that box
The Doctor goes back in the tardis narrowly avoiding explosions and brings the the box out and commander broach grabs it from his hands
THE DOCTOR:You can always trust me
AMY:Come on then doctor We can go now can't we
COMMANDER BROACH: Definitely not if you think you are getting off without any punishment just because you gave the box then I need to make it very clear to you.NO WAY CAN YOU LEAVE NOW!!!Prepare them for the trial
Soldiers grab them punch them and then carry them over to the prison where they put the doctor and Amy down.They then lock up the prison
AMY:Where are we doctor?
THE DOCTOR:Where do you think?
AMY:We look like we are in a prison cell
THE DOCTOR:The 63Rd Century
AMY:What about it doctor?
THE DOCTOR:It is the year 6271 the year when the human empire was fully established and execution laws began again for all of the empire
AMY:Please don't say we are going to be executed
THE DOCTOR:Sorry but we can't escape this is the end
AMY:You will survive won't you because they can only kill humans can't they?
THE DOCTOR:Yes but you will die I am so sorry I got you into this
AMY:I would have always went with you and I would rather be executed by humans than be fed to a star whale,exterminated by a dalek or been killed by the mind of a weeping angel in my head so I think I have been quite lucky being executed isn't that bad of a death.
The doctor starts banging the railings on the prison loudly.
THE DOCTOR:WHY DOES THIS HUMAN EMPIRE HAVE TO BE SO STUPID THIS IS RIDICULOUS YOU KILL INNOCENT PEOPLE WE ONLY STOLE THAT BOX TO HELP A FRIEND JUMPING OUT OF A SPACESHIP
Commander Broach opens the cage with soldiers behind
COMMANDER BROACH:Very interesting but you stole it Thats all we need to know
Escort them to the trial room
COURT LEADER:Yes or No?did you on the 21St June 6271 steal the byzantium's home box from the delirium archive?
THE DOCTOR:Yes I did I know that you can't kill me just try no one on earth has the power and technology to kill me.
COMMANDER BROACH:Quite incorrect we have a very interesting disintegrating matrix destabiling quarterforming degenerating dalequafing pfelobic gram progenerator.
Which is capable of destroying anything in this entire universe very easily.
THE DOCTOR:Where did you get this machine?
COMMANDER BROACH:We got it from a crashed alien boiler and we also got the technology which captured you and your companion from their.
THE DOCTOR:All this technology is impossible even the daleks and the timelords aren't advanced enough to produce that sort of technology it's starting to worry me what race dropped this boiler and now the human empire in the 63Rd century has a lot more power than it should have.
COMMANDER BROACH:We have a lot of power because we are the most advanced species in the universe We own the Stars!!!
THE DOCTOR:I really don't think so
COMMANDER BROACH:anyway Court Leader get on with the trial
COURT LEADER:So you admit to your crime?
THE DOCTOR:Yes I do Just get on with the proceedings
Court Leader and other officials start talking to themselves
10 minutes Later
COURT LEADER:Right you and your associate are sentenced to execution for stealing the byzantium's homing box from the delirium archive
COMMANDER BROACH:You will be executed after a nice meal is sent to you
THE DOCTOR:Don't bother it will be totally wasted we will eat the food and then all the food will be disintegrated along with us
COMMANDER BROACH:You need a last meal it is part of the proceedings
AMY:If you don't want the meal I will have it all I am starving
THE DOCTOR:Oh aright then but you eat most of it timelords don't eat human rubbish
Broach and the officers lock the cage and leave.
THE DOCTOR:I have got a plan
AMY:What?
THE DOCTOR:I tell them I am a Timelord It is bound to work the human race are always looking for new species's
AMY:Will they believe you?
THE DOCTOR:It is always worth a go at anything when you are about to be executed soon
AMY:They really want you dead though I doubt they will stop the executions if they find out you are alien
THE DOCTOR:Yeah that is true every human on this planet wants me dead for the whole of time
AMY:I don't want you dead
THE DOCTOR:Can I really be sure about that?
AMY:Trust me you can be 100% sure about that
Commander Broach and Soldiers arrive at the prison Cell and unlock the cell and come inside
THE DOCTOR:I have something to say I am not human I am part of a race known as the timelords
COMMANDER BROACH:Well it is definitely worth a look
SOLDIER:It is a trap
COMMANDER BROACH:We have full security in this police department don't you worry they can't escape
In the scanning room
COMMANDER BROACH:This is excellent He is an alien
COMMANDER BROACH:Is your wife alien
THE DOCTOR:She's not my wife
AMY:I am too attractive for him
THE DOCTOR:Surely now you let me go and not be executed
COMMANDER BROACH:No you will still be executed
THE DOCTOR:but you want to explore you will miss the chance of discovering my race
COMMANDER BROACH:No we still can we have your DNA and your genetic codes we can clone you
THE DOCTOR:No the shadow proclamation won't let you
COMMANDER BROACH:We own the shadow proclamation
THE DOCTOR:No you don't
COMMANDER BROACH:Yes we do let me show you
Broach shows an updated version of Microsoft powerpoint and he shows an impressive sideshow to the doctor
COMMANDER BROACH:The shadow proclamation a proclamation who shadow the government and do important experiments to help every department of the country focusing mainly on science and law
THE DOCTOR:Not that sort of shadow proclamation
COMMANDER BROACH:Their is no other type of shadow proclamation
AMY:Doctor thats an updated version of powerpoint it is incredible
THE DOCTOR:What do you expect in the future the human race always advance
AMY:Now what happens now
COMMANDER BROACH:You will go back to your cells and wait for your meal and then be executed
THE DOCTOR:What a brilliant day this is going to be GERONIMO!!!
COMMANDER BROACH:Geronimo?What on earth does that mean
THE DOCTOR:Its a very peculiar cry which is said before something incredible or terrifying or exciting is going to happen
COMMANDER BROACH:Escort them to their cells and don't you worry doctor you will definitely executed we will all die if needed too to stop another criminal getting free
Broach and soldiers return Amy and the doctor to their prison cell
5 minutes later
Cook unlocks the chamber and presents food
COOK:Stake and Chips
THE DOCTOR:Wonderful tuck in Amy
the doctor passes the food to Amy and starts eating it
The doctor punches cook and locks the cell with the cook waking up and being trapped meanwhile Amy stays outside the cell still eating the meal
THE DOCTOR:Hurry up!!!
AMY:It is too enjoyable to waste
THE DOCTOR:Drop the food
AMY:Alright doctor
Amy drops the food
Down the bottom of the so called dungeon of prisons Broach prepares to collect amy and the doctor for the execution and notices them running away
COMMANDER BROACH:After them and officer here is a key unlock the cook
Officer unlocks cook out of cell
COOK:Thank you very much it is very cramped in their
OFFICER:It is my pleasure to rescue you cook
SOLDIER:They will head for the blue box
COMMANDER BROACH:I agree soldiers take the shortcut and cut them off
SOLDIERS:Yes Sir
The Doctor and Amy run down a corridor and find the Tardis
THE DOCTOR:Wonderful The Tardis
AMY:We escaped
THE DOCTOR:Yeah we did Amy no one is good enough in the mind to execute us time travellers
The Doctor and Amy start to enter when soldiers and broach appears and the soldiers hold their guns up ready to fire
SOLDIER:Stop right there or we shoot
AMY:Unfounately doctor it isn't quite over yet
COMMANDER BROACH:It son will be I have had enough of this put them in the execution machine immediately
Soldiers grab them and put them under a strange glowing machine
COMMANDER BROACH:Get it ready
OFFICER:Yes Sir
COMMANDER BROACH:Get the prime minister he needs to see this
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:So you have them well done where are Tom Mills and Professor Cooper?
COMMANDER BROACH:Dead the machine which dragged these criminals back through time and space into our custody blew up and killed them Where is your assistant Adam Jones?
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:He is doing some important filing work about how we are planning to organise events to make sure they all know the new laws because criminal activity is getting higher they needed to realise they are going to get caught.We are much better security wise as a country now ever since we split up from the rest of the democratic states
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:By the way I am sorry for the deaths I will make sure their families get full compensation
COMMANDER BROACH:People die all the time Casualties are Casualties Accidents are Accidents Tragedies are tragedies we all must learn to forget and move on for our country
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:Quite right the protection of our empire is the most important thing and we are loyal to the bone and ready to die for our empire and our country and if you are not then you are committing treason and shall be executed
AMY:Doctor what are the democratic states
THE DOCTOR:Wales,Scotland,Northern Ireland,Republic of Ireland,France,Portugal,Italy,Egypt,The Caribbean,Canada and England used to be in
AMY:So is it like the future UK
THE DOCTOR;In a manner of speaking yes with the republic of Ireland back in and other near countries although its more like a smaller more selective group like the European union but the only difference is all the countries aren't European and they are all mixed to certain parts of continents and doesn't contain most of Europe
AMY:Sad isn't it we are about to be executed and we are talking about the democratic states.
THE DOCTOR:I think we get pushed into them booths at the top of this massive glowing machine
Isn't strange though them just leaving us hear not listening to us chatting away we could escape and they wouldn't realise
THE DOCTOR:Trust me they would shoot you dead always looking for impossible exits
AMY:We are going to die
THE DOCTOR:Yeah I hope it isn't that painful
AMY:It never is
THE DOCTOR:Don't back you're live on it
The Doctor and Amy both start laughing
SCIENTIST:When do I activate the machine?
COMMANDER BROACH:Once have secured the criminals and locked them in the booths
Soldiers secure the doctor and Amy and push them into the extremely squashy and small booths and then lock the booths
AMY:These booths are too small I can hardly breath
COMMANDER BROACH:Trust me very soon you won't need to breath
AMY:I would never ever trust you
THE DOCTOR:and neither would I
COMMANDER BROACH:It doesn't matter now in less than a few minutes minutes you will be gone wiped out of existence by us the human empire is stronger than you are grateful for
THE DOCTOR:and much MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MORE EVIL YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOU BEHAVIOUR TO YOUR OWN FLESH AND BLOOD KILLING PEOPLE WHO HAVE DONE SMALL CRIMES YOUR EMPIRE IS POINTLESS STUPID AND FRAGILE WHO WOULD WANT TO OWN AN EMPIRE WHICH STINKS LIKE HORSE MANURE!!!
COMMANDER BROACH:Save your breath Criminal nothing is going to save your life
COMMANDER BROACH:Activate now and end these criminal's lifes
The Prime Minister nods his head
SCIENTIST:Activating Now
OTHER SCIENTIST:20 Seconds till disintegration is achieved
BOTH SCIENTISTS:10 9 8 7 6
One minute Earlier On the Argon Ship

Based on the toy model to a size of 2.2M
ARGON LEADER:Hurry up the doctor is in terrible trouble we must rescue him as far as we know he could be seconds away from his death
ARGON:The are getting very close to their execution we will not be able to rescue them in time
ARGON LEADER:Crash the ship using maximum acceleration we must achieve over one million warp to be in time to save the doctor's life
ARGON:You are going to kill us sir
ARGON LEADER:Trust me this ship is strong enough to withold crashes.
Head straight to the left of the execution chamber so we can execute our rescue successfully
ARGON:I Obey
ARGON LEADER:it is incredibly important that he survives because I know that their are much darker terrible times to come for the universe and he must be their to save us all
Back in the execution chamber
BOTH SCIENTISTS:5 4
COMMANDER BROACH:What was that big bang?
Argons hurry into the room and shoot the machine then the scientists
BOTH SCIENTISTS:2 1
The machine goes dead just before the crystals were going to fully activate and disintegrate the doctor and Amy
SCIENTIST:The Machine has Gone Dead
BOTH SCIENTISTS:AAAAARGH!!!
More Argons Start entering the room
ARGON LEADER:Free the doctor and his companion
AMY:Thank You
THE DOCTOR:You should have let us die now you will cause a war
ARGON LEADER:You saved our children from the roloclaurus this is how we repay you
THE DOCTOR:I don't ever need repaying

Flashback The Doctor and The Argon Leader Remember their encounter
Argonia 6254
Massive yellow headed ring shaped like a doughnut with green long squidgy tentacles coming off each part of the ring like a jellyfish whole creature about as big as a T-Rex in size two times as wide with big gap in the ring where no tentacles form or anything.With big teeth and mouths coming off each squidgy circle on each tentacle with bigger mouths and teeth on the yellow ring.
ARGON LEADER:Is that a massive jellyfish sort of thing
THE DOCTOR:It is a roloclaurus a very terrifying creature
SARAH JANE SMITH:What can we do about a roloclaurus?
THE DOCTOR:I don't know still thinking
ARGON LEADER:What does it want?
THE DOCTOR:Your children for meat that is what all of its kind have h want children perfectly soft meat perfect taste their bodies can digest less developed skeletons adults are too developed and have too hard skin they couldn't bite bite into them
SARAH JANE SMITH:So all the argon children are going to die unless we work out how to stop it
Roloclaurus can be seen chewing and digesting many argon children very fast
CHILD:AAAAARH!!!AAAAARGH!!!!AAAAARGH!!!!
MOTHER:You have ate my child go away from this planet
Mother shoots the creature many times without even minorly injuring the creature until her bullets run out
THE DOCTOR:Have you got a big transmitter
ARGON LEADER:Yes
THE DOCTOR:Where?
SARAH JANE SMITH:Over There doctor
THE DOCTOR:Thanks Sarah I can see it now
SARAH JANE SMITH:Well I am guessing that whatever you have got planned is better idea than offering it a jelly baby or trapping it with your long scarf
THE DOCTOR:Trust me I have got a much better idea
ARGON LEADER:What exactly are you planning to do and how will it be successful?
THE DOCTOR:I am sonicing the transmitter onto the roloclaurus draining the electricity and pouring it onto the roloclaurus roloclaurus's are allergic to electricity to much contact with it and they burst open and it is terribly horrible I just hope it has the sense to flee by the way when I have done this all the electricity for the planet will be lost do I have the permission to do It?
ARGON LEADER:We have many electricity mines we mine it every day we would recover in a few months do it now before more children have to suffer and that creature grows in strength
The doctor sonics the transmitter onto the roloclaurus and it once it loads of times flies away incredibly fast across the stars
SARAH JANE SMITH:Well you didn't have to kill it that's good
ARGON LEADER:Thank you doctor
THE DOCTOR:It was my honour Anyday Anyday
ARGON LEADER:How can I repay you?
THE DOCTOR:I am sorry but you can never repay me too hard and trust me I have always searched for ways.
ARGON LEADER:If I ever find a way to repay you I will straight away
THE DOCTOR:Bye then
ARGON LEADER:Bye doctor I have work to do organising the electricity rations
THE DOCTOR:You will find away to get that electricity through them mines
ARGON LEADER:I am sure I will Bye Doctor
THE DOCTOR:Bye
Argon Leader walks away curiously wondering through the expression in his eyes whether he will ever see the doctor again
SARAH JANE SMITH:Roloclaurus whatever next I have seen Mummies,Androids,Daleks,Cybermen and now this How can i cope with this new life I lead
THE DOCTOR:You are only a journalist Have a jelly baby?
SARAH JANE SMITH:I want a green one please
The Doctor takes a green jelly baby out of the bag and puts it in her hand
SARAH JANE SMITH:Lovely Taste mmmmm!!!
THE DOCTOR:I can tell you are not coping without Harry
SARAH JANE SMITH:It is just that I keep thinking of how things would have been different if Harry had stayed How he would ave faced antimatter then mummies then androids and then a big jellyfish like Roloclaurus
THE DOCTOR:I miss Harry aswell but Sarah I think their are times when we all have to move and not be glued to the past
The Doctor and Sarah Jane Smith step in the tardis and it dematerialises
End of Flashback
ARGON LEADER:Without you our next generation would have been wiped out by that roloclaurus
THE DOCTOR:Watch out Argons they have holded their tensions for a while now but they are getting read to fire
SOLDIER:FIRE!!!
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM:Shoot Them!!! Kill them all!!!
Argons try to escape
COMMANDER BROACH:After them
Argons shoot successfully at PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM and COMMANDER BROACH
PM DARREN HALLOINGHAM/COMMANDER BROACH:AAAAARGH!!!
OFFICER:FIRE!!!
ARGON:AAAAARGH!!!
Argon killed by Officer
THE DOCTOR:come with me
The doctor,Amy and the argon leader quickly duck and escape down a corridor
AMY:So you have met the doctor before
ARGON LEADER:Yes Thats right he saved our children
THE DOCTOR:From the Roloclaurus He saved us because I had saved the argonian children it was his way of repaying him after i told him that he couldn't repay me 17 years ago in his timeline but in mine it was about 215 years ago I was a completely different man back then
ARGON LEADER:To me you are the same man
THE DOCTOR:My rules Who I am What I do are always the same passed down for all the timelords but my personality change in different ways when I change my face it is strange you recognised us
ARGON LEADER;Us Argons have so good smell we could smell you out and feel your emotions we knew you were introuble
THE DOCTOR:You never told me your species had these sorts of abilities
ARGON LEADER:Anyway before I go to fight these humans I have a very important for you doctor.Do you know about Pandorica and those cracks?
THE DOCTOR:Yes what about them
ARGON LEADER:They have been wiped out of existence
AMY:Well that is good
THE DOCTOR:How?
ARGON LEADER:Their has become a new threat aliens of legend are invading the universe suspending the cracks and the threat of Pandorica temporarily you know about that technology don't you
AMY:What about the technology?
ARGON LEADER:It is not human
THE DOCTOR:We know it came from a crashed boiler tube
ARGON LEADER:You must have realised that the technology was beyond any known races ever at any period time
THE DOCTOR:Yes I did get on with it
ARGON LEADER:The technology came from a vastly advanced and developed spaceship which's inhabitants throw these out to replace them with better and better it is a constant activity
THE DOCTOR:Who could have built that technology?What aliens from legend?What else do you know?
ARGON LEADER:I don't anyway else other than the prophecy that if the one called the doctor doesn't act quick enough then the battleday will be a defeat and the whole universe shall to the aliens who were hidden in legend for so long now ready to rise.
THE DOCTOR:Now you are getting me incredibly worried
AMY:Anyway thanks for your help and I really hope we see you again
ARGON LEADER:I hope to see you again
The Argon Leader leaves them to battle the new war against the human empire
On the surface
Bullets firing smoke forming and fires burning in the air
SOLDIER:Fire
ARGON:AAAAARGH!!!
OFFICER:Kill them all
SOLDIER:Fire
ARGON:AAAAARGH!!!
SOLDIER:Their is too many of them
Argon Leader Aprroaches
ARGON LEADER:Humans surrender we have two warships ready to destroy this planet
ACTING PRIME MINISTER ADAM JONES:We have three heavily armed spaceships Fire!!!
ARGON:AAAAARGH!!!
Argon Warship
ARGON:We are losing shields
ARGON COMMANDER:AAAAARGH!!!Evacuation Hull Breach Immediate Evacuation
ARGON LIEUTENANT/COMMANDER/OTHER ARGONS:AAAAAARGH!!!
Control Desk explodes and kills everyone on the bridge
Human Spaceship approaches and gives a critical blow and the Argon Warship is destroyed
Human Spaceship
CAPTAIN:Well done target the other warship
OFFICER:Reroot power to shields now
AMANDA:I can't the system is stuck we are defenceless
CAPTAIN:Immediate Retreat and Evacuation
AMANDA:Manoeuvre Impossible sir Warp Drive Disabled
OFFICER:Reroot all the power to the teleport system
AMANDA/OFFICER/CAPTAIN:AAAAARGH!!!
Human Spaceship Explodes after Further Argon Warship Attack
Hall
AMY:What are you going to do doctor?a new massive war is breaking out
THE DOCTOR:The Ships will be destroyed then more and more ships will be called i can't end this war it is too big and I created it
AMY:Are you sure you can't stop it?Don't Give up yet doctor
THE DOCTOR:Two whole empires are at war
The Doctor starts crying
AMY:What is wrong?
THE DOCTOR:Nothing's Wrong
AMY:Doctor I understand you are upset but you have to get over it
The Doctor starts ripping up things,knocking things over and starts properly vandalising the hall
AMY:Stop It!!!You Will et yourself into more trouble
THE DOCTOR:It is all my fault I created war you are still not getting it Amy
AMY:It is not worth vandalising the place
THE DOCTOR:This is all part of history it always has been I created this because of me stealing that box and getting the Argons to rescue me.This is the war that becomes World War 8 and technically the first intergalactic war.It all starts here through me in the 63Rd century and it all ends in the 78Th century with all the Argons wiped out of existence their world like earth without humans predators and all sorts locked inside a cold green skied world with red seas and blue soil with something missing intelligent humanoids and it was all because of me and 75% of the human empire that ever lived in them centuries died because of me
AMY: I'm sorry it happened but their is nothing we can do about this it is just history bad things happen you just have to recover quickly and move on doctor
THE DOCTOR:You still don't understand Amy this is the war that turns the human race fully evil they had their evil moments before but this war changed them like what happened to my own race and I was forced to kill them the human race turns into a race only bothered on extending the empire across the empire killing and killing and I created their passion for this I turned your race Amy into the daleks a copy of the evil of the daleks not in a casing but in the mind They end up enslaving most of the universe nothing compares to what they end up turning into because of me
AMY:You couldn't stop it doctor you very just unlucky you turned out to be the one who creates a war which must happen anyway
THE DOCTOR:I was so tempted all the time to go back and stop this war because I
loved the Argons so much and I wanted to stop all the suffering from happening and
in all this time I have just realised it was me who created this terrible war
AMY:It is still not entirely your fault humans always had it in them and I am sure the Argons would have turned up some time and caused the war
THE DOCTOR:No they wouldn't of the Argons are peace lovers who only fight for their heroes and exceptional circumstances I was their only hero they were a isolated race they would have never went to war if it wasn't for me
AMY:Come on grumpy face you said to me before that the human race was gentle in hundreds of thousands of years in the future maybe this war helps them evolve and see their faults and become kind across the universe
THE DOCTOR:Yeah I suppose that is right
AMY:So you're acts ended up doing good in the end don't forget that
THE DOCTOR:Come on into the tardis Amelia Jessica Pond restaurant just for you don't you forget that I promised you I would never forget that
The doctor and Amy go in the tardis and it dematerialises
15,018 years later
ARGON:I am last of my race killing me would be genocide.You do not need to kill me.
PM DOUGLAS CAMPTON:WE have to protect our empire if you escape your species will grow again and we will go to war again and your side could win no we definitely must kill you
ARGON:I am the last of my race you can't destroy me you have destroyed us all and you are now going to destroy me for your empire you evil people.All I have ever wanted is peace.
PM DOUGLAS CAMPTON:We have to wipe out your race forever your race destroyed 75% of the entire empire and you shall pay for it
PM DOUGLAS CAMPTON:Soldiers kill him we must to defend our empire
ALL SOLDIERS:Fire
Bullets are fired consecutively and kill the argon
ARGON:AAAAARGH!!!
OFFICER:That is it now with the Argons destroyed we can start to rebuild our empire again the universe shall be sorry we shall rise and conquer the universe enslaving everyone in our paths to ultimate glory we shall become the rulers of the universe
PM DOUGLAS CAMPTON:Yes indeed launch the probes we need to explore more into space and yes our empire shall begin now we shall begin our conquest of the universe the human empire shall very soon rule the entire universe
OFFICER:Yes Sir
PM DOUGLAS CAMPTON:Glory shall be upon us very very soon because the human empire shall rule forever over the inferior species's of this universe we shall rule as the superior rulers of the universe
OFFICER:We have found a planet with a unintelligent easily enslavable race this is our next target
PM DOUGLAS CAMPTON:we will launch our spaceships tomorrow and plan our mission today
OFFICER:We certainly will be around the universe as the best species in the universe we definitely shall rule over this entire universe
End Titles

Flesh and Stone Review

Outstanding Totally Outstanding Some thoughts how did the doctor, Amy and river song escape out of the Byzantium the gravity failed their should have been no escape it was a similar moment to the age of steel where we never seen them climb right to the top of the ladder and why is Amy trying to cheat on Rory with the doctor?Who did river song kill?Was it the doctor?and however it was Why on earth did she kill him?and how will the Pandorica open?when will Amy's wedding day be?Probably the finale but not vampires of Venice too big of an event.Still the running time should be longer and their was a minute long next time trailer...
What I am looking forward to in the next episode
1.How a building goes up in smoke
2.What creatures the vampires really are they are not vampires apparently they are otters or fish creatures.
3.Vampires killing people.Sucking their blood.
4.How people get changed into vampires
5.How Amy escapes not being turned into a vampire

6.How the doctor escapes the vampires as seen in the preview clip on Jonathan Ross
7.1580 Venice
8.Seeing whether Rory gets any strange remarks in Venice for wearing a silly top with a picture of him and Amy in a love heart
9.Seeing what sort of reaction Rory takes to seeing the doctor
10.Finding out what sort of a companion Rory is going to be (He is companion for the next three episodes after this aswell)
11.The Doctor talking to Rory about Rory's Fiancée and explaining about time travel to Rory
12.Finding out what this horrible thing is

13.How on earth whatever is taking over humans and turning them into vampires got here and finding out exactly what they are
Rating:2000/10 or More/10 Outstandingly Brilliant and anyone who said David Tennant will always be the best actor to play the doctor should really run because Matt Smith is really starting to thrash him in all departments of the role.

Saturday, 1 May 2010

Flesh and Stone

The episode has received three votes.It was anticipated by three people.Please don't vote it as how can you anticipate something you have already seen.

Tuesday, 27 April 2010

My Series plan

1-Brainstealers
2-Enemy of the Daleks
3-The Conflicted Rescue
An alien,a criminal who has stolen something very precious is being held under full execution in the new laws of the newly formed human empire but luckily for the criminal an invasion of Argons who have been saved by the alien try a rescue attempt which causes war to break out can the doctor stop a war between the argon and human empires?
4/5-Tricks of the Orlords/Changing the Past
An old friend of the doctor's tries to calm the tensions on the planet of Olopp between too rival races but secrets are being hidden as one orlord has survived intent on increasing the tensions of hate to the doctor's old friend but why and how can that help his plans of bringing back the Orlords?
6-Dispanded Sherwood
Sherwood is disappearing faster and faster with huge no spaces being left the doctor enlists the help of robin hood as he tries to work who is stealing Sherwood.
7-Conspiracy on the Grotchel
The grotchel newly made human traveller ship but some of the humans on the ship are really not human a conspiracy is happening on the ship as aliens prepare to feed the ship to a being of signifigant importance
8/9 The Oncoming Storm/Victory of the Chosen
The doctor finds himself on juos a planet where humans are living with the peaceful Valroon who can be violent under mass amount of metallic waves.The doctor finds that the valroon are attacking the humans and in the cliffhanger discovers that old enemies have survived and are stronger than ever and the doctor must make a terrible choice as he discovers more secrets and discovers that not everyone can be trusted...
10 The Winds of Time
The doctor's companion is taken by the winds of time and the doctor starts a journey to find her and discovers many over people have fallen foul to the winds of time and are collected in pictureform in a dark and empty museum.Can the doctor escape the winds of time and rescue Amy and the other people who have fallen to the winds of time?
11 Infected Ants
in 89Th century earth Ants have been mutating because of leaked fuel from a very
advanced spaceship which is leaking fuel through the time vortex.The doctor finds that the spaceship is heading for 21St century earth...
12/13 The Truths of an Ancient Legend/Battleday
Earth faces it darkest day as thought legend creatures turn up with power more than even the timelords could imagine enemies which could wipe the daleks out in minutes.These creatures threaten to destroy the universe can the doctor stop their plans before battleday begins?

The Conflicted Rescue Synopsis

An alien,a criminal who has stolen something very precious is being held under full execution in the new laws of the newly formed human empire but luckily for the criminal an invasion of Argons who have been saved by the alien try a rescue attempt which causes war to break out can the doctor stop a war between the argon and human empires?

The Time of Angels

The time of angels was anticipated by 8 people not 9 I know that over vote was added later than broadcast because after it was broadcast I saw that it had finished on 8 votes.Now a very important message from the doctor:
Don't vote The Time of angels,
Don't Blink
Don't stare at the eyes
Stare at the body instead
Don't take a video or a picture
Don't turn your back
and don't blink ever

Don't vote the time of angels because it has already been aired how can you anticipate something you've already seen?

Sunday, 25 April 2010

Doctor Who-Enemy of the Daleks

Earth,2010 POLICE MEETING
OFFICER:Thats now 100 nurses dead and 100 school children have disappeared the school now has no pupils
SERGEANT MITCHELL:This is unacceptable we are the police we keep track of whats happens around here where did they go? this doesn't make any sense
OFFICER:One thing that seems strange is the school was meant to be vaccinations in that week that must be a connection
OFFICER:What are you doing?
SERGEANT MITCHELL:Contacting UNIT I want them to do a full investigation of the school.
OFFICER:Do you believe aliens maybe hiding in the school?
SERGEANT MITCHELL:It is very likely and whatever the cost if aliens are on earth they must be stopped.
2 Hours Later UNIT HEADQUARTERS
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:We have just received a priority one call well we know what to do
COLONEL MACE:What?
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Its fairly obvious contact Martha Jones she knows the doctor's phone number
COLONEL MACE:Martha Smith-Jones she married Mickey Smith
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Thank You for correcting me
A few minutes Later
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Hello is Martha Smith-Jones there?
MARTHA SMITH-JONES:Yes what do you need me for
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:We need the doctor's number
MARTHA SMITH-JONES:Here it is make sure you write it down
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Get some paper Colonel
COLONEL MACE:Here is some
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Read the number out Martha
MARTHA SMITH-JONES:Here it is 07700 900461
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Call the number Colonel before it is too late
COLONEL MACE:Calling 07700 900461
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Thank you for your cooperation
MARTHA SMITH-JONES:Glad to be of service Goodbye
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Goodbye
(MAGAMBO puts the phone down)
In the Tardis
AMY:What's that noise?
THE DOCTOR:Sounds like a phone to me but I haven't got a phone have I?
AMY:Well the phone on the tardis console isn't ringing
THE DOCTOR:What is then?
AMY:Sounds like a modern phone to me but where is it coming from doctor?
THE DOCTOR:Its coming from oh of course I know what it is its my mobile phone I left it in the console room when it blew up I wonder where it has ended up now?
AMY:Its hard tell where the ringing is coming from doctor
THE DOCTOR clicks his fingers
THE DOCTOR:The Swimming Pool
AMY:How did it end up in the swimming pool?
THE DOCTOR:I don't know
AMY:You never do
In the Swimming Pool area
THE DOCTOR:The Mobile Phone it is over there
AMY:You are seriously not thinking of going in are you?
(The Doctor takes his jacket and braces off and jumps in)
(The Doctor swims to the phone,answers it and is electrocuted)
COLONEL MACE:Doctor?
THE DOCTOR:Yes Colonel what do you want?
COLONEL MACE:We have a situation
THE DOCTOR:What is the date and year?Where?
COLONEL MACE: 31St August 2010 Unit Headquarters Chiswick,London
THE DOCTOR:Goodbye Colonel
COLONEL MACE:Goodbye
(The Doctor leaves the phone swims back and puts his braces and jacket back on)
THE DOCTOR:Come on Amy
AMY:Are you alright?
THE DOCTOR:Fine
AMY:You were electrocuted
THE DOCTOR:Worse things have happened to me
(The doctor and Amy go down the stairs and the doctor quickly goes the consoles and presses switches on the console)
THE DOCTOR:Coordinates Set here we go Back to earth Amy Pond
(Amy Pond Smiles)
THE DOCTOR:GERONIMO!!!
(The Doctor collapses)
AMY:Doctor what is wrong?
THE DOCTOR:Don't touch me if you don't want to be electrocuted
AMY:What can I do?
THE DOCTOR:Go to earth and find out what is happening
AMY:What about you?
THE DOCTOR:I will be fine in a few hours
(doctor falls unconscious)
(Amy opens the doors of the tardis and sees Colonel Mace)
COLONEL MACE:Where is the doctor?
AMY:He has been electrocuted
COLONEL MACE:Oh Dear No doctor never mind come in
AMY:Who are you?
Colonel Mace Saluts
COLONEL MACE:Colonel Mace who are you?
AMY:Amy Pond
COLONEL MACE:Nice to meet you you must be the doctor's companion
The Dalek Base in Thorburn School
DALEK:The 100 experiments have all succeeded
The Dalek Leader approaches the dalek is black and has red globes to symbolise that he is the leader.
DALEK LEADER:Well Done now with this knowledge everything on this planet can be destroyed
DALEK:First we must infiltrate The Unifed Intelligence Taskforce's Headquarters so that we can use the massive transmitter
DALEK LEADER:That will be simple we do not even need a Defriglator to change our appearance for this they shall all be exterminated
Doctor Who Title Sequence
AMY:So what has been happening
COLONEL MACE:100 nurses have been found dead with their body electrocuted in a very strange way I think the nurses have been killed by aliens and the kids kidnapped for experimenting but it is too early to say exactly what has been happening
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:That Can't be right because the nurses were seen giving injections and the bodies were killed earlier than the reported sightings.
AMY:What if the aliens killed them disguised themselves as them and then gave the children different injections
OFFICER runs in
OFFICER:We are under attack we need to evacuate quickly
COLONEL MACE:Who are attacking us?
OFFICER: Petterpots Golden Petterpots
COLONEL MACE:What on earth?
(Amy quickly draws a sketch of a dalek and shows it to the officer)
AMY:Did they look like this?
OFFICER:How do you know?
AMY:I Have seen them before
OFFICER:Where is the doctor?We need him urgently more than ever Sir
COLONEL MACE:Electrocuted what a time for him to be electrocuted
Several Dalek Gun Sounds can be heard
OFFICER:They're coming
Daleks enter the room and exterminate the officer
OFFICER:AAAAARGH!!!
AMY:I Know who you are You are the Daleks
DALEK:You Shall be Exterminated!!!
DALEK:They Know stuff we need them alive so we can activate our masterplan
DALEK:Humans are stupid you're stupidity brings you to destruction
you do not know us apart from one a different type of daleks made from davros's DNA in 2009 they looked the same as us however you do not recognise us
DALEK LEADER:It is because of Davros's daleks that we survived they split the void open when attempting to destroy reality and we escaped through the void We are millions you can not stop the daleks.
A officer runs and punches a dalek hard in the eyestalk smashing their eye
DALEK:My Vision is impaired I can not see AAAAARGH!!!
Dalek Blows Up
DALEK LEADER:You have killed a dalek you must be exterminated
Dalek exterminates officer
OFFICER:AAAAARGH!!!
DALEK:All you attacks are useless against the daleks you will cooperate or be exterminated
DALEK LEADER:These are the cleverest humans on earth they understand than helping us will have no benefit to them and will kill their race where being exterminated will save their race so we must hypnotise them and dehypnotise them and let them see their planet fall
(special dalek heads up to them with a hypnotism device Which looks like a brick with a blue diamond in the middle instead of a dalek sucker)
The dalek activates this and Colonel Mace,Captain Magambo and Amy Pond fall unconscious
DALEK LEADER:Scanning their minds I have found knowledge that the doctor is unavailable.
ALL DALEKS:Nothing in the universe can stop the daleks Now
10 Hours Later
Everything is set up daleks are pressing switches to activate things and they are now in the transmitter room
DALEK LEADER:You have now been dehypnotised you are locked in forcefields and you can watch you're planet die
AMY:What are you planning?
DALEK LEADER:We are setting up our devices with our experiments we can transmit Void DNA Across every Nanometre of the planet everything will be pulled into the void this transmitter will connect to all the other transmitters all over the world pulling everything into the void.
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:You will kill yourselves you are full of void DNA.
DALEK LEADER:It is necessary we will destroy ourselves to destroy earth the doctor's favourite planet THE ULTIMATE REVENGE!!!
ALL DALEKS:REVENGE!!! REVENGE!!! REVENGE!!!
DALEK LEADER:Start the device first set the dials to start sending the void DNA and then 10 minutes later once that is completed open the void.
DALEK:I obey
AMY:Wait a minute how did millions of daleks fit into the school in the first place?
DALEK:We had invented a Defriglator which shapeshifts us into different forms we used this for the experiments and turned ourselves into nurses so that we could test the DNA and implant the Void DNA then open the Void over that area once all the daleks had evacuated and the children were pulled into the void.Most of the daleks were shapeshifted to particles while those needed for the experiments worked.
COLONEL MACE:Where are the other daleks now?
DALEK LEADER:Guarding all the other transmitters in the world ensuring the plan succeeds
AMY:How did they get their so fast?
DALEK LEADER:We invented new technology we can travel without support the entire earth in half a minute
DALEK LEADER:Is the Void DNA Transmitter Active?
DALEK:Yes
DALEK LEADER:10 minutes till the doctor's paradise is destroyed after so many tries from the daleks finally we shall win
DALEK:Victory is Coming The Daleks Shall Win
ALL DALEKS:The Daleks shall Win!!! The Daleks shall Win!!! The Daleks shall Win!!! The Daleks shall Win!!! The Daleks shall Win!!! The Daleks shall Win!!!
Strange bleeping noise is heard louder and louder on the dalek scanners
DALEK:A new dalek ship is materialising above earth
DALEK LEADER:EMERGENCY Call all the daleks back and make them all arrive about this UNIT Transmitter
DALEK:Scans show that the dna of the daleks onboard is dna from the original daleks
DALEK LEADER:They are inferior daleks only the dna of recent daleks can be accepted
Exterminate the inferior daleks
ALL DALEKS:Exterminate the Inferior Daleks!!! Exterminate the Inferior Daleks!!! Exterminate the Inferior Daleks!!! Exterminate the Inferior Daleks!!!
The daleks off the ship teleport into the room
SUPREME:Exterminate the void DNA converter and all inferior dalek technology Earth shall become a new Skaro not be pulled into the void
DRONE:I obey
(Drone exterminates the machinery)
SUPREME:You are are all enemies of the daleks Exterminate!!!
DALEK LEADER:You are an enemy of the daleks!!!Exterminate!!!
Loads of dalek sounds can be heard all the gold daleks in the room are easily destroyed as well as the dalek leader.
SUPREME:Millions more inferior daleks above teleport us above Eternal
ETERNAL:I obey
AMY:Well the doctor is not the only enemy of the daleks
COLONEL MACE:Thats saved our day now they have destroyed their technology the forcefields should not function
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:That has just made our day worse now a massive dalek war is beginning above London and all the unit soldiers have been exterminated
AMY:At least we are not all going to be pulled into the void.Do you think we will still all have Void DNA in us?
COLONEL MACE:No because I overheard the daleks say that until the void dna transmitter has completed transmitter no void dna will be stabilized yes their will be fragments but they will be destabilizing and will disappear quickly
AMY:That is a relief
COLONEL MACE:Amy here is a gun we must defend earth.
In the Sky of Earth
DALEK:You are an enemy of the daleks
SUPREME:You are an enemy of the daleks
Dalek exterminated by supreme
SUPREME:We must spread across the sky we must destroy the inferior daleks
SCIENTIST/STRATEGIST/DRONE/ETERNAL:We Obey
DALEK:EXTERMINATE!!!
A family comes out of the cinema.
MARTIN:That was a lovely film imagine if aliens were real and we seen them arriving on earth
ANDY:Not in our lifetimes
MANDY(MOTHER):Oh my god look in the sky
JOHN(FATHER):Real aliens fighting in the skies of london
ANDY:AAAAARGH!!!
Andy is exterminated by Scientist
SCIENTIST:All humans below shall be exterminated
AMY:What do we do?
DALEK:EXTERMINATE!!!
STRATEGIST:EXTERMINATE!!!
(Strategist exterminates dalek)
Loads more gold daleks can be seen being exterminated quickly by the original daleks
30 minutes later
NEWS REPORTER:Breaking News killer Aliens are fighting in the skies i urge you to stay indoors and keep together i wish everyone the best of luck in this crisis we have pictures and videos
DRONE:The News Reporter will be exterminated!!!
NEWS REPORTER:AAAAARGH!!!
SCIENTIST:Only 100 inferior daleks to be exterminated
SUPREME:Exterminate!!!
LOTS OF GOLD DALEKS:AAAAARGH!!!
ETERNAL:Only one dalek left
SUPREME:Emergency Casing Destruction Imminent
Eternal quickly exterminates the last dalek
DALEK:AAAAARGH!!!
ETERNAL:EMERGENCY TELEPORT!!!
AMY:were did the other daleks go?
THE DOCTOR:back to their ship they will need extra forcefields and ship repairing systems to repair their casing they will have to time shift to another destination and absorb the energy as well to repair their casing because they almost died if the eternal had teleported them away seconds later they would have died
AMY:Why were the daleks fighting each other?
THE DOCTOR:Their has been several different changes in dalek DNA over time the changes have made them almost a different species and the daleks that arrived were original DNA and the gold daleks had recent DNA they fought in the time war
AMY:So the daleks in the future can be an enemy of the daleks in the past and the opposite way round
THE DOCTOR:I am also an enemy of the daleks
THE DOCTOR:Amy just think without these original daleks we would of all been sucked into the void.Amazing isn't it daleks saving earth.
AMY:Well if it wasn't for Winston Churchill aswell because he called us to WWII and got you to testimony creating new original daleks
THE DOCTOR:Come on back to the tardis
AMY:Where are we going now?
THE DOCTOR:Somewhere new
AMY:Away from daleks?
THE DOCTOR:Hopefully
the doctor smiles and the tardis dematerialises and a crack can be seen in the fires of destroyed london
COLONEL MACE:How can a crack be in fire?
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:It is not a crack
SERGEANT MITCHELL:I can hear something
COLONEL MACE:Get our sound equipment out it could be important
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:What can you hear?
SERGEANT MITCHELL:AAAAARGH!!!Pandorica is opening?Doctor,what do we do?AAAAARGH!!!
Stomp stomp stomp you will be deleted Pandorica rising AAAAARGH!!!This is the end!!!
CAPTAIN MAGAMBO:Pandorica?Deletion
COLONEL MACE:We ma\y never find out what it means or maybe earth might be in danger
SERGEANT MITCHELL:It is probably some stupid prank
All three nod heads and walk away the crack can be seen getting wider and getting shinier
End Titles

Saturday, 24 April 2010

The Time of Angels Review

The Time of Angels? How can I review this?Too good Well i can't say too much well the best things were the incredible opening it just was amazing,the weeping angels killing people,Amy turning into stone gradually,the doctors mistake,the lights going out more and more angels quicker and quicker and the cliffhanger shooting the Byzantium Why?
What was Bad about the episode I will probably look back but nothing I can see I am going on iplayer to see how long it was it was too short again.well apart from that it was brilliant.The next episode what I am looking forward to
1.The Angels Gaining in Stength
2.Amy turning to stone gradually.
3.The Forest
4.Weeping Angels
5.More Secrets about the future
6.Finding out why the doctor shot the Byzantium
7.Why the angels killed people and didn't take him to the past.
8.What on earth is the time of angels.
9.how on earth he escapes the angels
Rating Impossible to rate too incredible
9.99/10.00

Doctor Who -Brainstealers

Here is episode 1 of the secret project which i think is set after the Silurian story anyway this new project is for me to write you some scripted episodes of doctor who I must tell you now their not full length like Doctor Who Script 4b but they are decent short stories and I hope you enjoy them.I will now post the first episode called brain stealers:

Doctor Who-Brainstealers
Earth,1954

MOLLY:This new TV is great
MOTHER:What's On
MOLLY:Primeval
MOTHER:What's that about
MOLLY:It's about anomalies
(Knock on Door)
MOTHER:Here is the Pizza's
(Mother opens the Door)
MOTHER:I Don't get it their is nobody their but their are pizza's
ANDREW:Molly (Quietly)
Molly:Who are You?
ANDREW:I am Andrew Taylor you're new best friend
MOLLY:No My Mother will always be my best friend
ANDREW:We'll see
2 Days Later
MOLLY:He's Real
MOTHER:No He's not Its just your clever imagination you think he's real but trust me he's not
ANDREW:Molly Nice to see you again
MOTHER:You not hugging anything molly
MOLLY:I am hugging Andrew and if you don't think he is real my friend will kill you
MOTHER:He's not real stop getting obsessed in him Andrew is in your mind that's why he is invisible to everyone except you
MOLLY:I have had enough of her KILL HER!!!
ANDREW:I will do anything for you molly
Andrew Turns into real form


Large Orange webbed Feet
2 times larger than human feet
MOTHER:AAAAARGH!!! I don't get it their is nothing their AAAAARGH!!!
Her mother lies on the floor fully eaten with only blood and bone left.
Doctor Who Title Sequence
Estate,1954 Tardis Arrives(No Noise)
THE DOCTOR:I Learn everything from river song
AMY:It's a shame I liked the noise
THE DOCTOR:You should have this, Tardis Key
AMY:Thank You
AMY:Where Are We?
THE DOCTOR:1954 My favourite don't now why though great taste
AMY:How Can a Year have a taste?
THE DOCTOR:If I say it does I say it does My Rules My Tardis go back home if 1954 hasn't got the right taste for you.
AMY:Always the fussy one
THE DOCTOR:Right which direction Whale Saver
AMY:Whale Saver?
THE DOCTOR:Is that a Rhetorical Question? Whale Saver
AMY:Stop It Doctor!!! I saved a star whale but don't call me after it people around here will think I am a mad Nature Saver
THE DOCTOR:Come On 1954 isn't that bad
(Doctor Wanders off)
AMY:Doctor Where have you gone?
AMY:AAAAARGH!!! DOCTOR!!!! DOCTOR!!!
AMY:What's Happening I am being eaten by an invisible monster or something
(Doctor throws loads of chicken legs at a flat and goes in front of amy and punches the monster even though he can't see it
Monster Scuttles off after chicken legs Injured
THE DOCTOR:Off you go it wasn't worth your blood
THE DOCTOR:Easy Peasy
AMY:you call that easy Peasy?
THE DOCTOR:Just Think Amy if you were four years older I couldn't have saved you
AMY:What do you mean?
THE DOCTOR:It was a brainstealer they only people over 18 and the more over 18 you are the quicker it takes for a brainstealer to eat it's victim you're only 21 but it you were 25 it would have been a different story
AMY:Why 25?
THE DOCTOR:By tasting the blood I can tell that it's last victim was 25.
THE DOCTOR:If Brainstealers have become this strong then it's a good job we stayed.
AMY:How Would we have not stayed we have only been here 6 minutes and 35 seconds
THE DOCTOR:How do you know?
AMY:Watch
THE DOCTOR:Where did you get that?
AMY:Picked it up from our last visit to Valronia
THE DOCTOR:You stole it Didn't You?
AMY:No
THE DOCTOR:Come On
AMY:I did but it corresponds to local time and counts the time since the latest change in time zone
THE DOCTOR:Give that to me
AMY:What are you going to do to it?
THE DOCTOR:Return It and then hand you to them,you can be a slave to them for all i care Amy the biggest rule never steal off people who aren't the same species
AMY:Are you allowed to steal off your own species then?
THE DOCTOR:NO but I did once
AMY:I should hand you over to your own people to become a slave oh I forget they're dead what happened to them?
THE DOCTOR:A bad day
AMY:You murdered you're people didn't I can tell though that look DIDN'T YOU?
THE DOCTOR:Yes
AMY:So I have aquantied myself with a mass murder I am not safe with you take me home right now!!!
THE DOCTOR:Amy it was the past I have changed
AMY:I don't care just take me home
THE DOCTOR:I can't
AMY:WHY?
THE DOCTOR:you need to become a slave to the valronians
AMY:Come Over Thats just a joke isn't it
Tardis leaves(No Noise)
THE DOCTOR: OK I will return you to your own time
AMY:Doctor I am fading away
Amy Turns into a brainstealer
THE DOCTOR:OH(Pause)NO!!!
THE DOCTOR:I am getting you back amy don't you worry and brainstealer luckily for me you haven't got any tricks up your sleeves like i have.
The Doctor sonics the brainstealer so that he can hear and see the brainstealer
The Doctor lands The Tardis with the brakes on making a noise
a second after he left and runs and locks the door with the key quickly locking the brainstealer inside
THE DOCTOR:Nicely Done and don't think you are escaping brainstealer
Back at Molly's House
MOLLY:My Brain Hurts What's happening?
ANDREW:You are being prepared
MOLLY:for what andrew?
ANDREW:You will see
Andrew turns into his real form and puts his
MOLLY:AAAAARGH!!!
(Doctor runs in room and sonics the brainstealer)
THE DOCTOR:Stop stealing her MIND!!!
ANDREW:Once the brainstealing has started it can not be stopped
Molly falls back on the floor with her body intact and another brainstealer is formed from the stolen brain energy.(The doctor taps her head to find out her brain has been totally removed and hears a rusty noise
THE DOCTOR:You removed her brain to form another brainstealer clever clever brainstealer
BRAINSTEALER:Another brain stealer has been created and we shall rule the world with this increase in strength
THE DOCTOR:but I don't get it Brainstealers can never get this strong maybe a few children but now using that to reproduce and killing adults for meat 1 in one day and almost another Brainstealers are lucky if they can eat one in a year or two this should be beyond you
THE DOCTOR:Tell me how you became this strong?
BRAINSTEALER:I have grown in strength ever since I grasped the existence of Molly Peravale
THE DOCTOR:Once a brainstealer starts to gain trust it starts to gain strength but this child was so incredibly imaginative that you gained in strength dramatically and now you have got all her mind you are strong enough to destroy the daleks The Perfect Child oh dear
BRAINSTEALER:She is the most imaginative creative and intelligent child in the universe and her brain shall lead the Brainstealers to rule the universe not just earth but the whole universe shall be ours we are now 1 million times stronger
THE DOCTOR:Why did creation ever make you?You were created to kill imaginative friends you are the truth behind imaginary friends
BRAINSTEALER:Now every child's brain shall be easily stole in seconds and new Brainstealers will be created we will be able to eat all adults in a very short time the empire of the Brainstealers shall begin
THE DOCTOR:Go on Brainstealers eat me think how delicious I will be you will get all the meat you need from me.
The Brainstealers start eating the doctor and then start feeling sickly.
THE DOCTOR:You don't get it do you Brainstealers you were only ever designed by nature on earth to eat human flesh
BRAINSTEALER:How are you not human? Who are you?
THE DOCTOR:I am the doctor I am a timelord from the constellations of Kasterborous
and if you are not happy run as fast you can!!! because this is what I do to every stinking threat to the universe.
Brainstealers(Both):We Can't Run AAAAARGH!!!
Brainstealers collapse and die.
THE DOCTOR:Killed by timelord flesh HA!!!
AMY:Well Done Doctor!!!
THE DOCTOR:Amy you're back
AMY:I am sorry for my attitude I realise that I am the person making you better and doctor don't you worry I will always be their for you
The Doctor Whistles a strange Whistle
AMY:What are you doing?
THE DOCTOR:attracting all the other Brainstealers
AMY:You will kill yourself you can't survive the bite of all the Brainstealers in the world
THE DOCTOR:Just Watch Me!!!
AMY:How will you get all the Brainstealers of the world here
THE DOCTOR:The Whistle brings them here it works as a connection to their speed it only works if it is used by lifeforms none brainstealer without the whistle they can only travel as fast as a average human
AMY:you can't destroy every child's imaginary friends Most of the Brainstealers aren't even strong to steal children's brains or kill adults for meat
THE DOCTOR:I am fed up with these Brainstealers I do what I want!!!No more children will be fooled by their imaginary friends and be killed Children will have imaginary friends no more no more!!!
The Brainstealers arrive in their true form and the doctor sonics them all.
BRAINSTEALER:Fresh meat both of them will make perfect meat
THE DOCTOR:So their is only 170 of you now Their used to more!!!
Wait a minute how do only 170 children have imaginary friends you can't double up so their are only 170 children with imaginary friends the idea isn't as common as before
AMY:Don't you get it doctor most children's imaginary friends aren't creatures they are made by their imagination and these Brainstealers are only doing what they are doing because they are designed to and are doing it yo survive killing them would be genocide.
THE DOCTOR:I think you just changed my mind
THE DOCTOR:RUN!!!
The doctor and amy run back to the tardis and takes off putting the brakes on making a noise
BRAINSTEALER:We have lost our meat we must spread out around the world again and this time we must fufil our mission to get the minds of children and the meat of adults.
BRAINSTEALER:I have got a crack in my head What's Happening?
BRAINSTEALER:You are being eaten by the silent menace of Pandorica.
All the BRAINSTEALERS:WORSHIP PANDORICA!!!WORSHIP PANDORICA!!!
The doctor and Amy land on Valronia a second after amy stole her watch in a dark abandoned work room with broken metal spreaded across the floor the valronians are mining for gold.The Tardis lands with no noise.
THE DOCTOR:Quikly
AMY:Where do i put the Watch?
THE DOCTOR:Where you stole it from
AMY:Their Coming
THE DOCTOR:I have a better plan
AMY:What?
The TARDIS leaves with no noise but returns to Valronia 11 days later and the doctor leaves the brakes on making a noise.
AMY:you left the brakes on
Amy slaps the doctor
THE DOCTOR:Don't do that again
AMY:It's alive you are hurting it and making it groan.
THE DOCTOR:I will be groaning in a minute if you keep slapping me
VALRON LEADER:Where is my watch?
THE DOCTOR:Here it is i was just saying amy wanted to lend it and here it is again.
VALRON LEADER:How Dare She?
VALRON LEADER:With that watch we would have stopped the invasion of pandorica
Kill Them!!!
Doctor and amy run into the tardis and leave TARDIS Leaves with no noise.
VALRON LEADER:Look What you have done you have hit my statue
VALRON LEADER:EXECUTE HIM!!! For Destroying My Statue
VALRON LEADER:My Watch!!! Brilliant!!!
VALRON LEADER:If you ever return again doctor i will swear to pandorica that i will kill you both.
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